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Week 6, Poetry

Welcome to the Writing Hub!

Each week, we will post a piece of text, an image or a video for you to respond to. You can record your writing in the comments section below or write it in your English book. These tasks are designed for the whole school to have a go at. If you find writing tricky, then ask a grown up to help you sound it out. You can download a sound mat from Twinkl for free; just use the code CVDTWINKLHELPS and search ‘sound mat’.

Remember, all the work from previous weeks stays ‘live’ so if you comment then we will still see it. It may take a while for a comment to appear as a Meadowside adult will have to approve it.

This week it is all about poetry! Carefully read the instructions below so you can add to a whole school poem! 

 

The Racetrack of Champions!

If you are in Reception or Year 1, come up with some ideas using the picture above and write another verse. Follow the same pattern of the poem. 

If you are in Years 2 – 6, why not use the information below to help you be more specific with your vocabulary choice. You can also write about what you saw or smelt if you like. You can write as many verses as you like at any time over the course of the week! 

16 thoughts on “Week 6, Poetry

  1. Harry phelps

    In the race track of champions I heard engines roaring ,tyres screaming it was very smokey and smelly.there were lots of tyre marks on the ground where they were skidding around the race track.

  2. Freddie Smith Y4

    In the racetrack of champions I heard …
    Ten roaring engines Vibrating the ground .

    In the racetrack of champions I saw …
    Ten epic cars going super fast.

    In the racetrack of champions I smelt …
    Hot smoke roaming the air.

  3. Craig Apple class

    In the racetrack of champions I smelt
    Four burning tyres
    As they speed on the course

    In the racetrack of champions I heard
    Ten thousand people cheering
    As the cars sped by

  4. Bella Whitlock

    Twenty-two determined warriors
    racing towards the finish line

    Thousands of excited voices
    roaring from in the crowds.

  5. Jasmine Bell

    On the race track of champions I saw …

    12 determend Racers driving towards the finish

    On the race track of champions I heard…

    Wheels squeaking and rubbing on the ground

    On the race track of champions I smelt…

    Smoke burning in the air

  6. Jack Organ

    On the race track of champions i saw…

    15 Furious Racers Speeding Towards The Finish Line

    On the race track I heard…

    9 Thousand People screaming Across The Line

    7 Thousand People Cheering Up For Their Contestant

    On the race track i smelt…

    Fiery Sparks And Smoke Coming From The Bottom Of The Contestants Cars

  7. Isabella ward year 3

    On a race track of champions I saw
    4 red and green lights flashlight so bright

    On the race track I heard
    Cheering crowds shouting hooray for the wining car that’s in sight.

  8. Lucy 🐎

    In the racetrack of champions I heard
    The revs of the deafening engines, Ambitiously waiting on the starting grid.

    In the racetrack of champions I smelt
    The aroma of the burning rubber tyres
    On the scorching tarmac.

    In the racetrack of champions I saw
    eighteen energised cars rearing to go!

    In the racetrack of champions I felt
    As if I was going to explode with nerves and excitement as the race began!

  9. Isaac Flagg ⚽️🎮

    In the racetrack of champions I heard,
    20 intrusive Formula 1 cars rumbling

    In the racetrack of champions I saw,
    pick and mix shop behind the stands

    In the racetrack of champions I smelt,
    the burning bacon butties fizzling in the shop

    In the racetrack of champions I tasted,
    my sandwiches that I got out of my rucksack

    In the racetrack of champions I touched,
    my coat when I put it on.

  10. Daisy Smith

    On the race track of champs I heard…

    The crowd go WILD as the action happened in front of their eyes.

    I smelt a burning sensation in the air of the FIRE as 1 Engine
    crashed right though the notice sign border.

    I saw the other racers speeding and dodging the cut-off of the racetrack.

    I tasted fear that I would not make the finish line in time before my rivals.

    I felt my hand against leather wheel trying to control the movement of my car to the end of this drama.

  11. 🌸🐾Seren Brain

    In the racetrack of champions I heard…
    Tonnes of engines clattering as they roared round the track.

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